While filming, we decided to change the script because we no longer liked it, it was too short. I like our new script better because it elaborates more on what is happening in the scene. Here is the updated script.
HOME SCENE:
(It is established that Ashley and Nicole are hanging out, they are sitting on the couch in the living room talking. Happy indie music is playing in the background)
Ashley: -gibberish-, Yea. And I don't know for him to cheat on me with her is just so disrespectful. I can't believe it. And I can't believe he would do that, after everything I've done for him, I literally went to his grandma's funeral...
(Ashley's voice fades away and Nicole's daydream begins)
DREAM SCENE:
(happy, romantic music plays as Nicole and Dylan frolic in the fields. Some time passes, now its the wedding.)
(Ashley is trying to wake Nicole up)
Ashley: Nicole, Nicole, Nicole!
(Nicole's daydream ends)
HOME SCENE PART 2:
(Nicole and Ashley are back on the couch, Ashley is shaking Nicole to wake her up)
Ashley: Nicole, Nicole, Nicole!
Nicole: Huh?!?
Ashley: Still thinking about him?
Nicole: Yea...
Ashley: Let's just watch the movie.
Nicole: Okay.
(Ashley turns on the TV)
HOME SCENE NIGHT:
(Ashley is on the couch, sleeping with a note on her forehead, "Had 2 go! Dishes r on counter! Love you, Nicole")
(Ashley wakes up, reads the note, then goes to put the dishes in the dishwasher. While putting them away, she sees a note from Nicole "Dylan + Nicole 4EVER")
Ashley: What the heck??… Dylan and Nicole forever... In her dreams
(The title comes up. end of the film)
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